Thursday, January 08, 2015

Review: Owned by M. Never *Review May Contain Some Spoilers*

Book Description taken from Amazon:
"I like you collared, baby. I like you naked, I like you mine.” 

Ellie Stevens has lusted over Kayne Roberts since he first walked into the import/export company she works for a little over a year ago. As Expo’s most important client, Ellie has always kept a safe distance from the man with the majestic blue eyes - until temptation finally gets the better of her. Impulsively, Ellie invites Kayne to one of Expo's infamous company parties her flamboyant boss is notorious for throwing. Unbeknownst to Ellie, the god in the Armani suit isn’t just the suave entrepreneur he portrays himself to be. Underneath the professional exterior is a man with a secret life, dark desires, and nefarious contacts. 

In a hidden corner of a trendy New York City lounge, the spark kindling between the two of them ignites. Unable to resist the sinful attraction, Ellie agrees to leave with Kayne, believing she is finally bedding the man of her dreams. Little does she know when she walks out the door, she’s about to be Owned. 

Owned is a dark erotic romance. Please pay close attention to the use of the words dark, erotic, and romance. It has intense sexual situations, a Master/slave relationship, mild abuse, and some violence. Reader discretion is advised.

My Review: 
I usually like dark, erotic romance and even like the use of BDSM sometimes when it's done right. I like plot twists that I don't see all the time in books. I even like it when things get taken right to the edge of being too much but there has to be a reason for all these things and it has to make sense. 

Ellie is a naive, sweet woman who thinks she's met the man of her dreams and after talking with him for just a bit, decides to leave with him. She has no idea that Kanye has set in motion things that will forever change her life. 

Kanye is more than meets the eye but deep down the man is very alpha, very dominant and most likely a sadist. 

Ellie is kidnapped and made to live the life of a sex slave but there are things that Kanye is keeping from her that would make her predicament make more sense if he had just told her. He says that there's a reason he didn't tell her but for me this reason just doesn't ring true because he could have showed her how to act, how to make it convincing. Plus the fact that he took so much enjoyment from causing her pain when he knew that he really didn't need to take things as far as he did, made him look like a jerk. He was extremely hard on a girl he knew to be a novice to the BDSM world and he didn't seem to care that he was freaking her out. He kept saying that he was doing all of these things to 'protect her' but there were so many other routes he could have taken that wouldn't have been so extreme on her. I just found some plot holes where they shouldn't have been and that made the book fall very flat for me. 

Making a story believable so that a reader isn't thinking, "Heh, yeah that just doesn't make sense or ring true at all." is a big thing for me. When I'm shaking my head while reading and trying to figure out why the story isn't flowing for me, then I know that something is wrong. 

I can totally see where the author wanted to go with this story and how the author thought this twist in the story would make sense to the reader but for me it just didn't. There were too many other things that could have been done and I was thinking of all of them after I finished the book. 

Kanye starts out looking like a bad guy then we find out that he's supposed to be the good guy or hero of the story but can he really be called a hero when he took enjoyment from keeping Ellie *the girl he's trying to protect* captive and taking her against her will? Doesn't that kinda make him the bad guy? He even says that having sex with her is better because she's not a willing participant. 

Then after all is done, the fact that Kanye thinks that Ellie is going to forgive him because he tells her the truth of what was going on....made absolutely no sense at all. I mean, really? I could have told you that wasn't going to go well. Kidnap a woman, make her family believe she's dead, hurt or never going to be seen again and torture, hurt and degrade her and think she's going to say, "Oh you had a good reason? Well okay then, all is forgiven." Yeah, not gonna happen. 

This is described as an "erotic romance" in the description. Well for me personally I like my romance books to end with an HEA *Happily Ever After* if a romance book doesn't have an HEA, can it really be called a romance? Not by me. 

If all of the reasons I listed aren't enough to stop you from reading this book...there's one more. It has a cliffhanger ending! There's really nothing I despise more than a cliffhanger ending in a book. Not that it would have made much difference in my rating but I really need authors to know that they need to stop doing that, readers don't like it. We want a beginning, middle and an ending...not a cliffhanger. Thankfully I got this book when it was free on Amazon because I would have been really mad if I had paid for this one.

I regretfully give this book 2 out of 5 stars


  1. And so ends your streak of 5 by 5 books, how rude lol

  2. Wow this sounds SO like one I read last year by Nashoda Rose. Like...pretty dang close but she pulled it off better it sounds like.

  3. Pat- LOL Rude indeed.

    Anna- Wow, that book really does sound like this one. A little bit of a story line difference but yeah it was like that. Just didn't do it for me at all.

  4. Right? I'm going huh I have SO read this before. I ended up liking the one I read. She managed to make it work for the most part. I think I gave it a 4. Haven't gotten back to the series but plan on it eventually.

  5. Anna- After reading this one and not caring for it, I don't think I'll read that one you pointed out. Doesn't seem like one I would care for.

  6. Yeah I can see that. I have that with 50 Shades. Any along those lines...Nope. Not happening. I tried reading the sample of yours and couldn't even get through it.

  7. I never did read the 50 shades books. I read enough of the reviews with quotes that I knew I just couldn't get through them. I'm pretty sure I got the idea for this book on the Kinkery. lol And I was like, oh it's Yeah, not so much.

  8. Oh it was so bad. I finally broke down and read it because I'd won it (before it got popular) and people kept hounding me on the blog asking what I thought. Blerg.

    Oys the Kinkery can be hit or miss. There are a few in there I disagree with STRONGLY over what makes a good book. lol I proceed with lots of caution in there these days.

  9. Hmm, I'm not one that has dipped into the darker erotic romance, but based on what you said, I don't think this is a good example of it either. It appears like the author wanted an excuse for a non-com situation that somehow made the master more appealing, but she missed the mark. Oh and yes, I'm a romantic so I need my HEA or at least a solid HFN and I loathe cliffhangers too. ;)


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